Thursday, March 25, 2010

post #2

It is unbelievable that in the twenty first century there are employers who keep taking advantage of worker people, and do not respect any law as they were in the Old west. “Wal-Mart has responded to the union drive by trying to stop workers from organizing -- sometimes in violation of federal labor law. In 10 separate cases, the National Labor Relations Board has ruled that Wal-Mart repeatedly broke the law by interrogating workers, confiscating union literature, and firing union supporters”. Clearly, in this piece of paragraph from Karen Olsson’s essay called “up against Wal-Mart”, we can see how workers do not have any right working for Wal-Mart. Wal-Mart workers are abused by their superiors which do whatever they want to prevent they join to form an Union.


this is one of the paragraphs of my draft. This paragraph has what i say, what they say and also response or so what?, but i do not know yet where to put it...

1 comment:

  1. Good start - read your first sentence aloud. What could you do to make it clearer?

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